Foreign silence beside fever roads:
the aroma of fog carries
the wind and twists delirium
as the red geraniums
fall to cold dune fields
sleepily in
cypress dreams
picked by
blazes
lodged to frosty solitude by the
sand hills. A blue dream flew above
aural ice chips; the dream-like
shadows slipped from dew where
the ecstasy in
your eyes is
like a fire
to me,
free.
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23 responses to “The ecstasy in your eyes.”
I really like the ending! Nice poem 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome :).
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Oh wow, this is so beautiful! It reminds me of a Tennessee morning during late Winter/early Spring. Poems like this are my favorite types, when you can feel like you’re standing in this perfectly painted landscape. Truly amazing ❤
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Aww, thank you so much. ❤
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You create some wonderful images!
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Thank you! 😀
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“red geraniums
fall to cold dune fields”
so evocative…just grand poetry!
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Thank you so much. ❤
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Beautiful poem, Lucy.
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Thanks! 🙂
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
“AURAL ICE CHIPS…” A BEAUTIFUL PHRASING!
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Thanks. 😀
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Hi, Lucy!
I have nominated you for the Sunshine Blogger Award, which you can read more about here: http://katiekay727.com/2020/01/25/sunshine-blogger-award/. Thank you so much for your writing, and happy Saturday!
Katie
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Oh, wow! Thank you so much. ❤
Happy Saturday as well. 🙂
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Your blog is growing considerably large! 😀
You definitely deserve it, your poetry is awesome!
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I’ve been surprised at the growth to be honest. Lol. But, nevertheless, it’s pretty cool.
Thank you so much! 🙂
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Wow! Delightful poem.
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Thank you!
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😉
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Wonderfully beautiful.
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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😊❄❄
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