Orchards in the waves at dark.

Posted on April 20, 2020June 19, 2021 by Lucy

fingers of waves
beauty in ocean’s skeleton
to the rhythmic death
like a lover
among the tides;
the path is yellow with petiole leaves
in the dew fields, the darkened orchards
in the brush of wind
looms.

Published by Lucy

"Poetess of darkness"–dVerse community; cat hoarder, guitarist, keyboardist, psych major. View all posts by Lucy

12 thoughts on “Orchards in the waves at dark.”

Vincent Ehindero April 20, 20208:40 am Reply

Beauty in ocean’s skeleton ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨

I love that

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1. Lucy April 20, 20208:42 am Reply
  
  Thank you. ☺️
  
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  1. Vincent Ehindero April 20, 20209:06 am
    
    😃you are welcome 🙏
    
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Jay Bleu April 20, 20201:44 pm Reply

almost like a siren song. . . hypnotizing. . .

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1. Lucy April 20, 20202:11 pm Reply
  
  Wow! Thank you so much.
  
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  1. Jay Bleu April 20, 20202:29 pm
    
    You’re welcome!
    
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sandomina April 21, 202012:34 am Reply

Only a craven would steal a fruit when he could take the orchard. Thanks for such beautiful words.

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1. Lucy April 21, 202012:42 am Reply
  
  Thank you. 😊
  
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cheriewhite May 2, 202011:39 am Reply

I loved this!!! Beautiful! ❤

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1. Lucy May 2, 202012:08 pm Reply
  
  Thank you so much!
  
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Satyen May 18, 20206:58 am Reply

As Vincent said, I loved the beauty in the ocean’s skeleton line. And I loved ‘the rhythmic death by tides like lovers’ metaphor too much.
Beautifully written. Fantastic writing.

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1. Lucy May 18, 20208:58 am Reply
  
  Thank you so, so much.
  
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