Orchards in the waves at dark.

fingers of waves
beauty in ocean’s skeleton
to the rhythmic death 
like a lover 
among the tides;
the path is yellow with petiole leaves
in the dew fields, the darkened orchards
in the brush of wind
looms.

© 2020 lucysworks.com All Rights Reserved.

12 responses to “Orchards in the waves at dark.”

  1. As Vincent said, I loved the beauty in the ocean’s skeleton line. And I loved ‘the rhythmic death by tides like lovers’ metaphor too much.
    Beautifully written. Fantastic writing.

    Liked by 1 person

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: