Look at all the eyes
of humanity and light
cry into blood-welling
forgotten in unbridled free verse;
around the corner that last breath
in the mirror
moves in dream and desire
nigh to each taraxcum dandelion
flowering over motherβs relics;
another death
under the stars.
Into the darkest shadows,
in murderous torpor,
times of the fish
and times of the born
a man, a woman
and a flower in the dark
kneeled into the lines
of a dream,
lines of a dream
flows like death
dream and death
in a frenzy fire, my friend,
solitary like a forsaken past
in each shade of the sea
and a temple surrounding a dark voice,
in cold hands.
I see all their eyes on me
in blue ebbs
and lonesome ferns;
I look at their eyes
earthbound,
Iβd awake,
and I could not whisper
into the integrity,
in a dance of a frost dark
in poetic desire
free of mind.
Β© 2020 lucysworks.com All Rights Reserved.
44 responses to “Look at all the eyes.”
“forgotten in unbridled free verse…” Clever. π
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Thank you! π
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nice!!!!!!!
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Thanks!
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Awesome. I love these lines: “to each taraxcum dandelion/flowering over motherβs relics”
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Thank you so much.
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OMG stunning! β€ well done! So well written lucy! xoxo
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment. β€ β€ β€
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Youβre so welcome Lucy π
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Beautiful lines with crazy flow….
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Thank you so, so much. I am very happy you enjoyed this piece. β€ β€
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You are a great artist….a writer & a poet, Lucy….You must know that β€οΈ
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Great poem….
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Thanks!
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A truly mind boggling piece Lucy, and these 4 lines really grabbed my attention…
“times of the fish
and times of the born
a man, a woman
and a flower in the dark”
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Wow, what a beautiful and emotional song. Thank you for sharing it, and thank you as well for your kind words on my poem. It is very appreciated. β€ β€
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Always my pleasure Lucy….
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
ANOTHER MASTERPIECE OF FEELING.
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Aww, thank you.
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Wonderful poem, Lucy.
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Thank you so much.
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A beautiful poem, Lucy!
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Thank you!
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I like this especially: in a dance of a frost dark/in poetic desire π
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So glad. Thank you for your feedback!
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You’re quite welcome π
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Beautiful! Great job Lucy! π
It flows like a song π.
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Wow! Thank you so much. βΊοΈ
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You’re welcome! π
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Utterly beautiful.
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Thank you. β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Awesome
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Thanks!
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Beautiful writing
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Thank you!
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Pleasure
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Wow, to your words. Shared this here..
https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/05/15/look-at-all-the-eyes-lucy-of-lucys-works/
Let me know if you have any objections. π Cheers.
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No objections. Thank you for letting me know and for sharing. So glad you enjoyed this piece. βΊοΈ
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Welcome to Kindness π€π€
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