hot suns.

Posted on January 1, 2021June 19, 2021 by Lucy

breasts upon a kumquat
sun
down from the pied-piper
in the woman’s moon, I’ve seen before

I can’t even recognize
when I rise from
the hot sun
until a dream takes
the land in sultry menace

upon the fire-flower’s
mouth to kiss.

Published by Lucy

"Poetess of darkness"–dVerse community; cat hoarder, guitarist, keyboardist, psych major. View all posts by Lucy

18 thoughts on “hot suns.”

Arun Jee January 1, 20217:45 am Reply

Beautiful.

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1. Lucy January 1, 20218:51 am Reply
  
  Thank you!
  
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  1. SteelWarrior/PoetOfSteel January 1, 20214:19 pm
    
    I have no words…again.
    
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  2. Lucy January 1, 20215:39 pm
    
    Thank you so much!
    
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bokeh snow January 1, 20212:56 pm Reply

Hot damn, girly. This is GOOD!

I especially love the phrase “sultry menace.”

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1. Lucy January 1, 20213:43 pm Reply
  
  Thank you!
  
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Hannah Gandhi January 1, 20216:31 pm Reply

You are beyond talented 😍

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1. Lucy January 1, 20217:00 pm Reply
  
  Aww, thank you. ❤️❤️
  
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  1. Hannah Gandhi January 1, 20217:01 pm
    
    It’s a pleasure Lucy 🙂❤️
    
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  2. Lucy January 1, 20217:03 pm
    
    ❤️❤️❤️
    
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short-prose-fiction January 1, 20216:40 pm Reply

Gorgeous Lucy! Happy New Year.

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1. Lucy January 1, 20217:01 pm Reply
  
  Thank you, G!
  
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  1. short-prose-fiction January 1, 20217:35 pm
    
    My pleasure hon.
    
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  2. Lucy January 1, 202111:23 pm
    
    💗
    
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Nguyễn Thị Phương Trâm January 1, 202110:24 pm Reply

Breast upon a kumquat sun!! I love it Lucy!!

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1. Lucy January 1, 202111:23 pm Reply
  
  Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked that line.
  
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silent poetry January 3, 20217:18 am Reply

This is gorgeous…. “upon the fire-flower’s
mouth to kiss” beautiful ending ❤️

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1. Lucy January 3, 202110:09 pm Reply
  
  Thank you! 😀
  
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