I am a droplet off the sun.
A madman hunting
Taunting roots of a clockwork rain.
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Found this in my drafts for a long prose piece I’ve since abandoned. Funny, how looking back, I didn’t see much to it until I recently changed the final line.
Pseudopsychosis. 
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I’m pleased you rediscovered it! ⭐️
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Thank you, Ingrid. 😊
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I love the first line: “i am a droplet off the sun”. Excellent piece!
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Thank you!
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Love the first line.
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Love the first line. I wish I would have written it. It is a very nice haiku.
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Thank you so much, Ed. 😃
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I am a strong supporter of short little poems. They’re like little messages we write on a scrap of paper, and hide away in our pocket, leave in the pages of a book, or simply toss into the careless breeze. They’re so light, but carry such depth of meaning. You might have written twenty beautiful lines after this, but I’ll be happy to tell you that these three alone caught my heart without any further trouble.
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Aww, thank you so much. ❤
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