planet-like darkness
in the space
somewhere in your eyes.
white with spinning dreams,
verging on tree veins
(we are) lost to time
like man
we are lost to our darkness
bony in starvation,
none the God in your head
insecting thought
to a trance
with prose
for our dead poet minds
and the dead-child flowers
that were weeds
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Written 7/28/2020.
10 responses to “Somewhere in your eyes.”
Those first three lines are a picture of distance and desolation.
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Thank you, I like what you took from those lines. I definitely agree.
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Love the progression at the end, it provides a very neat resolution
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Thank you!
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So very well written! The last six lines were just amazing. Great work, Lucy ❤
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Thank you so much. ❤️❤️
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This work blends into a very pleasant evening watching the night blossom.
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Thank you. ❤️
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Yes yes and yes 💖
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Thank you ❤️❤️
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