Somewhere in your eyes.

Posted on July 18, 2021July 29, 2022 by Lucy

planet-like darkness
in the space
somewhere in your eyes.

white with spinning dreams,
verging on tree veins
(we are) lost to time
like man
we are lost to our darkness
bony in starvation,
none the God in your head
insecting thought
to a trance
with prose
for our dead poet minds
and the dead-child flowers
that were weeds

© 2020 Pseudopsychosis All Rights Reserved.

Written 7/28/2020.

Published by Lucy

"Poetess of darkness"–dVerse community; cat hoarder, guitarist, keyboardist, psych major. View all posts by Lucy

10 thoughts on “Somewhere in your eyes.”

obbverse July 18, 20214:14 pm Reply

Those first three lines are a picture of distance and desolation.

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1. Lucy July 18, 20214:55 pm Reply
  
  Thank you, I like what you took from those lines. I definitely agree.
  
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Nope, Not Pam July 18, 20214:17 pm Reply

Love the progression at the end, it provides a very neat resolution

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1. Lucy July 18, 20214:54 pm Reply
  
  Thank you!
  
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AB July 18, 202111:12 pm Reply

So very well written! The last six lines were just amazing. Great work, Lucy ❤

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1. Lucy July 19, 202112:10 am Reply
  
  Thank you so much. ❤️❤️
  
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johnsmithiiimxiii July 18, 202111:43 pm Reply

This work blends into a very pleasant evening watching the night blossom.

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1. Lucy July 19, 202112:11 am Reply
  
  Thank you. ❤️
  
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samuelthemadlad July 19, 20217:48 pm Reply

Yes yes and yes 💖

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1. Lucy July 19, 20219:34 pm Reply
  
  Thank you ❤️❤️
  
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