Artificial (Draft).

Posted on August 16, 2021July 29, 2022 by Lucy

pray to your artificial god,
my mania sulks, 
the black corvid longs
for me;
lost within shunted 
humanity
	an affair with emotions
there, into a new split mind
never understanding the burden of faith
bound to my hands. I wait death
with my tears, 
a nightmare of art:
feeling well and guilt
feeling well and forgotten.

© 2021 Pseudopsychosis All Rights Reserved.

Written for the twitter MadVerse prompt: “Artificial Gods.”

Published by Lucy

"Poetess of darkness"–dVerse community; cat hoarder, guitarist, keyboardist, psych major. View all posts by Lucy

19 thoughts on “Artificial (Draft).”

the blighter's rock August 16, 20216:27 am Reply

Goodness me, that’s powerful

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1. Lucy August 16, 20219:13 am Reply
  
  Thank you so much! 😀
  
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OLACROWN PROMOTION August 16, 20216:53 am Reply

That’s great and amazing

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1. Lucy August 16, 20219:13 am Reply
  
  Thank you!
  
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  1. OLACROWN PROMOTION August 17, 20219:36 am
    
    You’re welcome lucy
    
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Quibaos August 16, 20217:39 am Reply

My God! This is quality!

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1. Lucy August 16, 20219:13 am Reply
  
  Thank you greatly! 😊
  
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Nope, Not Pam August 16, 20214:13 pm Reply

I think you got me with that opening line 🙂

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1. Lucy August 16, 20214:14 pm Reply
  
  Aww, thank you. 😀
  
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Jeff Flesch August 16, 20219:25 pm Reply

An affair with emotions, and, split mind, wow, that’s powerful. Also love the last couple lines and the paradox you are pointing too. Is beautiful, Lucy.

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1. Lucy August 16, 20219:27 pm Reply
  
  Thank you so, so much!
  
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  1. Jeff Flesch August 16, 20219:52 pm
    
    You’re most welcome, Lucy. Always!
    
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  2. Lucy August 16, 202110:00 pm
    
    ❤ ❤
    
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AB August 16, 202111:25 pm Reply

That opening line was really powerful. The way you merge emotions and thoughtful thinking together is really exceptional. Loved this Lucy ❤

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1. Lucy August 16, 202111:25 pm Reply
  
  Aww, thank you so very much!
  
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  1. AB August 16, 202111:29 pm
    
    You’re welcome 🙂
    I’d love to read the completed version of this some day.
    
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  2. Lucy August 16, 202111:32 pm
    
    ❤ ❤
    
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Doree August 18, 20214:38 pm Reply

Wow!

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1. Lucy August 18, 20215:43 pm Reply
  
  Thank you! ❤
  
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